You each have had experiences that changed the way you view the world. In this essay, I want you to tell me about one event that occurred within a twenty-four hour period that changed your life. I want to experience this event as you experienced it, so walk me through it step-by-step. A successful essay will use a combination of the techniques described in Chapter 2 of , such as representations of conversations, active verbs to move the essay along, strong, specific details, and strong story-telling to create a world in which the reader feels what you intend the reader to feel. I also expect to see your world-view changed in some way by the end of the essay. This essay must be at least three pages long, be set in double-spaced, 12-point Times New Roman font with one-inch margins, and your name, my name, and your course must appear in the top left-hand margin on the first page only. All subsequent pages must be noted with your last name and all pages must be numbered. i did brain storm and that what you going to use 1-what I did after graduation 2-going to usa or stay in usa 3- what major is the best 4- no one help me choosing my major because I’m the oldest brother. 5- I decide to came to us 6- I Need money 7- I should get loan from my bank 8- finally I booked a flight to us 9- in the 9th of May 2014 10- I’m in Oklahoma to study English 11- I tried to eat halal meat only 12- after 8 months I got scholarship 13 – I like USA more than my country 14- my family wants me. 15- I can’t live alone I need a roommate. 16- I tried to cook 17- I’m finally 21 years 18- wait I can’t drink because I’m Muslim 19- every one knows me here thought that I’m Indian. 20- I just want to take a test from school 21- my dad refuses 22- as always 23- it’s time to focus on my future 24- the 24th of August 2016 at 9 am was my first class 25- software engineering 26- Missouri , Kansas city 27- Avila university 28- I moved from North Carolina to here 29 – I was in NC to study also English 30- I got 6 out of 9 in English test 31- my father starred to feel proud of me 32- my mom wants me to be near to her and wants me to go back but I told her that i have to stay here to be an engineer. 33- I love math but I hate graphing 34- my first English class was with Alison coupland in fall 2016 35- my second class is with her also in summer 2017 36-Ramadan is a rough month for me. 37- this is my first time that I fast out of my country 38- again it’s so hard 39- I got a puppy 40- she was 27 days’ old 41 – her name is Aria 42- it’s my first time that I raise a dog and I love it. 43- I hate computers
44- I bought my first car 45- I bought my first motorcycle 46- I want my mom and dad to came here and see me how I’m trying my best to keep them proud. 47- I cry every time I feel bad because it’s give me relive. 48- I want to try wine just to feel relax 49- I travel a lot in usa 50- half way to graduate 51- I got 3 F’ s and 3 A’s Last semester 52- number 51 to show you how my I’m sooo unlucky 53- I have 5 brother and 2 sisters 54- I’m the oldest that’s why my mom wants me back. 55- I quit smoking in 2015 56- my father is a smoker 57- Las Vegas is my dream city that I want to visit 58- I used to have blackberry 59- don’t believe everything you read 60- 100 detail is a lot 61- I met my wife in Oklahoma 62 – my supervisor was Ron Meclery 63- he did my first assignment for me 64- I worked with Walmart for 6 months 65- my first semester was the best semester for me. 66- every day I ask myself m I going to graduate? 67- most likely I’m going to 68- my first friend that I met here is my bff right now 69- in fall 2016 I saw snow for first time 70- while I’m doing the 100 details I remember my first semester in Avila. 71- I’m really sorry mom 72- I call my family ones a week 73- I used to call them every day. 74- mosa is my roommate 75- I thought he is gay person 76- I did not know what gay means. 77- when I came to us I did not know how to read and right my name 78- after 3 months only I learn a lot . 79- I start to watch movies (thank you Netflix) 80- I spent over 125000$ so far 81- are you really going to read all of that? 82- it’s a hard life in here but it’s made me strong man. 83- I’m going back to my country for a small vacation. 84- I start to eat meet 85- my brother graduate from high school 86- I love reading in English not in Arabic. 87- I love hacking computers but my major wants me to be a costumer service person. 88- some day I’ll hack Google. 89- I feed my dog every day 3 times 90- I wanted to be a safety engineer but I did not got chance. 91- my apartment got stolen in 23rd of Nov 2016 92- unfortunately my birthday is in 16th of Nov 93- the weather in here is very hot in summer and very cold in winter. 94- my favorite book is holes 95- I just want to finish school and go back to my country just to back to my old routine. 96- one fact about me that I haven’t been sick since I came to usa. 97- I hate American music. 98- I love Arabic music. 99- I’m taking 9 credit this semester just to prove to my father that I can do it. 100- I’m taking 2 classes of math and English 101- I hair this number in a lot of songs and I don’t know what it’s mean.